Some people think that it is best to save money for example in a bank or savings schemes. Other people feel that money should be spent whenever it is available, discuss these views and reach an opinion on this debate.

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money
or
money
should be saved in a bank or savings scheme. While most people want to support their financial expenses after getting paid, I believe that it is important to save
money
because you can take it in case of an emergency. on
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