studying at university in your hometown where your family lives or studying at university in a different city far from your family.

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Almost all people want to take academic education at university. Everyone has different dreams

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aim and target. The real question is where to study in your hometown or out of the city

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different way of studying

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where do you live while going to university shapes your university life

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it is more important that it looks because both of them have advantages and disadvantages. One of the most important issues about,

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is where to stay. If you live with your family there is no problem because you have your own room in the house

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you know very well the people you live with and most important one there is somebody to open the door when you come home. Unlike staying with your family

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studying outside create so many problems about accommodation. When you study at outside you have to live in dormitory or rent a house with your friends and sometimes with people you do not know. Mostly you cannot get along with your roommates

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even you do not argue with them there would be problems about sharing expenses

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cleaning or making noise. When we consider

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issue, studying near your family is better.

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studying at university in your hometown where your family lives or studying at university in a different city far from your family.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?

Most people are undoubtedly influenced by heavy commercialization and advertising of products; consumers are buying out of desire more than necessity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people lives. Other think that adults life brings more happiest, in spite of great responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they know only a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

Many people think that zoos are cruel. Others think they are helpful in protecting rare animals. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.