studying at university in your hometown where your family lives or studying at university in a different city far from your family.

Almost all people want to take academic education at university. Everyone has different dreams
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aim and target. The real question is where to study in your hometown or out of the city
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They are
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used as an intensifier
very
different way of studying
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where do you live while going to university shapes your university life
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it is more important that it looks because both of them have advantages and disadvantages. One of the most important issues about,
this
is where to stay. If you live with your family there is no problem because you have your own room in the house
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you know very well the people you live with and most important one there is somebody to open the door when you come home. Unlike staying with your family
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studying outside create so many problems about accommodation. When you study at outside you have to live in dormitory or rent a house with your friends and sometimes with people you do not know. Mostly you cannot get along with your roommates
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even you do not argue with them there would be problems about sharing expenses
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cleaning or making noise. When we consider
this
issue, studying near your family is better.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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