People are surrounded by advertisement which has an increase effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effect of this outweigh the negative effects?

In today's situation
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people
starts
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start
to get attracted towards
advertisement
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the advertisement
and get benefitted by the valuable
advertisement
. I would think not only an
advertisement
cause negative effect but
also
has
huge number
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a huge number
of good
thing
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things
can find by the
advertisement
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essay will describe the
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signs
and how the people benefit from the announcement.
Advertisement
is meant for creating awareness of respective
things which
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things, which
is new to
market
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the market
or an event which is going to happen outside an area.It can be either television
advertisement
, online
advertisement
or a notice.The main intention is to
delive
bring to a destination, make a delivery
deliver
the news to the public about a thing.
For instance
, individuals opting television in their leisure times
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Hence
, the popup of the
advertisement
appears while watching programs might useful for the applicants who searching for the job.
Secondly
,
company's
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the company's
manufacturing the products that need to get hit in the market in terms of
advertisement
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technology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
Technology
has been
evolved
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evolving
, so we should effectively use the resource
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Particularly, Business people make use of resources and get profited. For examples
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if the notice of vaccination for the baby couldn't advertised
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babies would not get benefitted by the polio vaccination by the government which was mandatory at their earlier stage.
Although
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Television
advertisement
is exist
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exists
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,
some people
has
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have
a television in their house was a dream. In that scenario
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,
offline
advertisement
like notice has been emerged. Some
advertisement
deceived people and the situation become
worsen but
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worsen, but
that
doesnot
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does not
mean the
advertisement
was totally neglected
.
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