describe a graph that shows average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, globalisers and non-globalisers.
The given bar chart
,
demonstrates the average Remove the comma
apply
rate
of domestic products in different nations
, categorized into three groups, wealthy countries, globalisers and non-globalisers
. As it's obvious from the graph, wealthy Correct your spelling
non-globalised
nations
reached the highest average rate
, about 5% in 1960s
, Change the article
the 1960s
however
they experienced a significant drop between Add a comma
,however
1960s
and 1990s and fell to 2%.
Correct article usage
the 1960s
On the other hand
, developing countries that had a global approach,
had an upward trend during Remove the comma
apply
this
period and growth from about 1% to nearly 5%. this
nation reached the highest rate
of domestic products among two other nations
in 1990s
.
we can infer from the graph that the GDP Change the article
the 1990s
rate
in developing countries adopting a non-global approach, fluctuated during these year
and they showed their top production Change the determiner
this year
these years
rate
in 1970s
. Change the article
the 1970s
Also
, it is noticeable that in
that time, all three Change preposition
at
nations
had an
about Correct article usage
apply
same
GDP.
In conclusion, as the graph illustrates, adopting a global approach to business will improve Correct article usage
the same
the
domestic Correct article usage
apply
productions
.Fix the agreement mistake
production
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