The maps show the changes of a community center 10 years ago and until the present
The two maps show alterations in the layout of a community centre after 10 years.
Overall
, it can be seen that the community centre has been significantly reconstructed and renovated after ten years, while
some minor features witnessed no change.
In the central part of this
building, the 100-seat hall, which accounts for the biggest field, remains unchanged over the ten-year period. A toilet has been added to its north, making the adjacent storage room shrink by half. To the west of this
Center, the garden has been demolished to make way for an indoor sports facility, whereas
the parking lot stays intact.
Looking at the map in more detail, four office rooms and the storage room have been replaced with a coffee space. While
the working operation has been relocated to the original spot of the coffee place, the storage room has been completely demolished. Finally
, the southern entrance and reception space and the kitchen on the southeast of the building are kept untouched.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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