In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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A part of population of different countries considers that the

government

should spend lots of money on improving

railway

connections between cities, while the

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

part of people finds more reasonable to spend large sums of money on

development

Suggestion

the development

transport

within cities. Today there are a lot of problems connected with public

transport

- negative an impact on ecology, an increasing of the inhabitants and the

appearence

outward or visible aspect of a person or thing

appearance

of immigrants

that is

the reason of lack of seating in public transports, low quality of technologies in some countries makes the using of public

transport

inconvenient. In my opinion public

transport

is the problem is necessary to solve, because it is used daily by settlers of big cities. So the

government

should think about investments into

improvement

Suggestion

the improvement

of technologies of public

transport

, because it can affect on

population’s health

Suggestion

the population’s health

For instance

, my

grand-mother

the mother of your father or mother

grandmother

grandmothers

grandfather

always feels bad herself and has problems with breathe because of traffic fumes and because of the large amount of people amount of people in the subway during the peak hour. On the other site it is really important to have good and stable

railway

lines, because

railway

connection allows to

transport

the large amount of production between cities. In each country there is a city that specialized in some type of production and its factories produce provision to help other cities. In conclusion,

refers to the speaker or writer

would say that both problems are necessary to be solved by the

government

, but

firstly

the

government

should satisfy the interest of the population within cities and should try to find the opportunities to

transport

the production between the cities not only by the

railway

trains.

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