The charts show information concerning speed-camera use, together with statistics on road accidents, for the city of Melbourne.

Both charts depict

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information about the count of

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speed

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and

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percentage of accidents and deaths on Melbourne’s

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starting from 2002 to 2005. From the diagram, we can see that, the number of speed

cameras

increased from 2002 to 2005

as well as

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of accidents on the road

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also

increased but the ratio of deaths declined. First of all, in 2002 the total number of speed

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was 40 and

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in 2003 it was not increased significantly but only by 5 numbers.

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increased

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to 60 numbers

while

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in 2005

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of speed

cameras

increased drastically to 140.

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of all, as per the chart, in 2002 the rate of accidents was only 3.4%, but in consecutive years that rate

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increased tremendously

such

as in 2005 it touched

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4%.

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, the proportion of deaths in 2002 and

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2003 was very small nearly 0.7%, but in 2004 it increased to 1%,

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again in 2005, it increased to 1.2%.