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The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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The given diagrams depict the information about the steps and equipment used in the
cement - making
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cement-making
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 process and
also
process
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the process
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 of concrete production of the cement.
Overall
, for
the
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adhesive
manufacture
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 there are 4 steps
like
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apply
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,
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 crushing, mixing, heating,
grinding
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and grinding
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whereas
, for
the
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apply
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concrete construction there is only one process where all ingredients are added to the concrete food processor. First of all, the major ingredient for
the
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plaster manufacture is limestone and clay and these products are crushed to form
its
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powder.
The
next
 step is,
this
 powder is added to
blender
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the blender
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 machine where it mixes and
move
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moves
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 forward to
rotating
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the rotating
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 heater. After heating the mixture, it passes to
grinder
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the grinder
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 machine to chop and grind
in
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into
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 tiny pieces and
then
 adhesive is formed.
Moreover
,
this
 sand is packed in bags.
Second
 of all,
sand
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and
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 is used in concrete management.
Initially
, 15% of adhesive and 10% of water is added to the concrete mixer.
In addition
 to these, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel is added to the mixer.
This
 food processor will mix all basic
material
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materials
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 to form concrete which is used for building purposes.
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