In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of this. How can we deal with those causes?

In most of the countries, criminal activities are thriving day by day
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This
is caused by a number of reasons
behind
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behind, such
such
as
unemployement
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
,
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,
illetracy
ignorance resulting from not reading
illiteracy
,
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,
profusion
,
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,
rising standards of living and many more.
However there
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However, there
is no
such
issue which we
can not
can not
cannot
deal with so here in the
eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
below will discuss about the main reasons and the ways to face these causes.
Firstly
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the people who are unemployed are giving a main hit to the crime rate as these people
can not
can not
cannot
afford to live in
society
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a society
they get involved to do crimes to
fullfill
put in effect
fulfil
their basic needs unaware of the fact that the results can be
distructive
causing destruction or much damage
destructive
to their lives.
Secondly
,
illetracy
ignorance resulting from not reading
illiteracy
is
also
a huge problem
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for
in
society as these people do not have any knowledge about how to live in a society with a good manner
in
addition these
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addition, these
people are agile and can be influenced easily to do any wrong task.
Furthermore
, profusion is
also
a reason which is getting
worst
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worse
as due to lack of facilities some people do not get what they want which makes them disturbed owing to their involvement in crimes.
On the other hand
, there are few things which can be done to face or deal with
such
a problem.The
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
and societies should take the equal
innitiatives
readiness to embark on bold new ventures
initiative
to solve
this
obstacle
for instance
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Free education should be provided to people who
can not
can not
cannot
afford to study
moreover
employement
the state of being employed or having a job
employment
opportunities can be introduced so that each one can earn money to serve their families. And
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of course
strict action should be taken who are convicted
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for
of
with
any crime so they can learn about the outcomes of their doings. To sum up, I would say there are considerable causes of
increase
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the increase
of crime rates and
ofcourse
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of course
by taking appropriate steps
this
problem can be
deal
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dealt
with
atleast
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at least
there would be a small change if each and every person get involved to solve
this
issue.
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