The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The graph compares the number of hybrid vehicle
sales
during a 4-year period in three geographical areas.
As can be seen from the graph, the data on total sales
in 2009 were twice as many as the number in 2006 as the level of all transport sales
increased through distinctive patterns during the 4-year period.
In the year 2006, the greatest proportion of selling
belonged to the United States in which vehicles were bought 250.000 on record Replace the word
sales
while
the figure in Japan and other countries shared the same number of sales
at somewhere in the vicinity of 50,000 hybrid transports. While
the US Sales
trend fluctuated over the following two years, it remained the highest figure which stayed at 300 thousand, compared to both Japan and the others with about 100 thousand of
Change preposition
in
sales
.
Afterward
, the commerce of transportation in the US fell to fewer than 300.000 in 2019 when the statistic in Japan rocketed to 350.000 Change the spelling
Afterwards
and
was the highest figure compared to the US and Correct word choice
which
other
which only rose by approximately 10.000 Correct pronoun usage
others
sales
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