In some cites and towns all over the world ,the high volume of traffic is a problem.what are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

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traffic
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became
has been became
is becoming
has become
becomes
was becoming
a controversial issue as it spread globally. Due to
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people endure many obstacles
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intend to explore the source of
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problem along with some viable solutions to it
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To regard with some possible factors of
this
trend.
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In
earlier time
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earlier times
an earlier time
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people used to less
transportion
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
transpiration
transition
services and they covered long and short distance through domestic animals
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sometimes by walking as well.Whereas
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these days
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everyone has their private
vechicles
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
and they
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reliably
on it for moving
farway
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far-away
and nearest destination.
Thus
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this
practice act as promote
traffic
level on roads.One
further
point is that
public
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the public transportation system
transportation
system is less effective because human beings does not reach at their
locatin
a point or extent in space
location
locations
on time as a consequence, they have to use private
vechicles
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
which leads to
traffic
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Another reason is behind that many people who travel rural areas to urban areas for obtaining education
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work
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medical services
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which helps to increase
traffic
because they
also
use private
vechiles
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
instead
of public
transportation
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further
with possible action in the favour of address
this
practice
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Primary and strong action should be taken by government is that
authorities
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the authorities
provide extra and improve public
transportation
facilities in order to reduce private
vechicle
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicle
on
roads
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the roads
alongwith
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along with
encourage people use public
transportation
and spread
awerness
having knowledge of
awareness
reagarding
with regard or relation to
regarding
health issues which may be
occured
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occurring
occurred
in
future
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the future
due to
traffic
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Moreover
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companies should allow cab for their
employess
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
employers
and people must walk for short distance which may help reduce
traffic level
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traffic levels
the traffic level
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reiterate that
traffic
has very
diverese
many and different
diverse
outcomes like increase accident rate
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pollution
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health problems.
Therefore
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government
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the government
and humanity can be reduced it with
consicious
intentionally conceived
conscious
steps.

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