Today more and more tourists are visiting places where the conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara deserts or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Vacation time is one thing that

different

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differentiates

differs

differentiated

people look forward to

enjoy especially

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enjoy, especially

with members of their families because it allows time to catch fun and

also

strengthens family bonding. Generally, people visit and explore new places that are different from where they are familiar with and

hence

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make trips to places where conditions are difficult

refers to the speaker or writer

.e.

places

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Places

with harsh

weather

conditions like the Sahara

desert

or the Antarctic. There are certain benefits that can be achieved during a

tourism

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touristy

visit to either the Antarctic or the Sahara

desert

For instance

, research work can be conducted in

such

environments which can open up a lot of discoveries which can be

further

developed into things which would have positive scientific and economic impacts on our society.

Furthermore

, the individual who comes up with

such

discoveries might have his or her status improved financially, especially if he or she has evidence based facts that are widely accepted by others who are in the same field of study with him or her because he would get handsomely paid when various sponsors are interested in offering assistance and support for his or her work in

form

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the form

of grants.

On the other hand

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certain disadvantages can be accrued to trips to places with harsh conditions most of which are health related. Considering the heavy wind intensity which is one of the characteristics of a

desert

, a lot of tiny sand particles are raised which can expose an individual to different allergic conditions.

In addition

, the scorching

sun which

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sun, which

shines directly on human skin can badly affect the skin of people who visit the

desert

without taking proper measures

such

as applying sunscreens.

Also

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exposure to extreme cold

weather

conditions in the Antarctic areas can cause various respiratory disorders which may be life threatening at times. In conclusion

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the quest for adventure and fun seeking can be satisfied by visiting different places of choice with either normal or harsh

weather

conditions.

However

, it is important to take certain precautionary measures that would protect one from the negative impact of those extreme

weather

conditions either hot or cold.

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