Today more and more tourists are visiting places where the conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara deserts or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Vacation time is one thing that
different
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differentiates
differs
differentiated
people look forward to
enjoy especially
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enjoy, especially
with members of their families because it allows time to catch fun and
also
strengthens family bonding. Generally, people visit and explore new places that are different from where they are familiar with and
hence
,
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make trips to places where conditions are difficult
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refers to the speaker or writer
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places
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Places
with harsh
weather
conditions like the Sahara
desert
or the Antarctic. There are certain benefits that can be achieved during a
tourism
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touristy
visit to either the Antarctic or the Sahara
desert
.
For instance
, research work can be conducted in
such
environments which can open up a lot of discoveries which can be
further
developed into things which would have positive scientific and economic impacts on our society.
Furthermore
, the individual who comes up with
such
discoveries might have his or her status improved financially, especially if he or she has evidence based facts that are widely accepted by others who are in the same field of study with him or her because he would get handsomely paid when various sponsors are interested in offering assistance and support for his or her work in
form
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the form
of grants.
On the other hand
,
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,
certain disadvantages can be accrued to trips to places with harsh conditions most of which are health related. Considering the heavy wind intensity which is one of the characteristics of a
desert
, a lot of tiny sand particles are raised which can expose an individual to different allergic conditions.
In addition
, the scorching
sun which
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sun, which
shines directly on human skin can badly affect the skin of people who visit the
desert
without taking proper measures
such
as applying sunscreens.
Also
,
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,
exposure to extreme cold
weather
conditions in the Antarctic areas can cause various respiratory disorders which may be life threatening at times. In conclusion
,
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,
the quest for adventure and fun seeking can be satisfied by visiting different places of choice with either normal or harsh
weather
conditions.
However
, it is important to take certain precautionary measures that would protect one from the negative impact of those extreme
weather
conditions either hot or cold.

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