"Prevention is better than cure" Out of a country health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I agree with the phrase "Prevention is better than cure" because preventing something before getting affected is always the correct approach.
This
helps the individual's and people around us with a good condition mentally and physically. Prevention cannot be taught to the people around us because it is a process which comes
form
a giver or sender
from
our inner mind and completely depends on the individual personalities.
Helath
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
Health
education is the only method which helps all of us to train our inner mind to be preventive. Education
also
gives us a better clarity of the consequences which we might end up with if we are not preventing
ourself
reflexive form of "you"
yourself
from unhealthy activities. Education is a medium to communicate so we can spread the positive vibes we learned to more people around us which will make all our life
more happier
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happier
more happy
and healthier. When we understand things better we handle the same in more wiser way only through
education we
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education, we
can understand and be more wiser. So I would like to conclude with the same quote "Prevention is always better than cure" for us to be preventive we should be educated and that will lead
for
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to
a better tomorrow.

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