the graph shows the number of people who went to the movies in the UK between 1990 and 2010

The given line graph illustrates information on the percentage of people who went to the movies in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2010. The people’s attendance is divided into four different groups.
Overall
, all the rates saw an upward trend throughout the given
period
despite some harmonic fluctuations. They almost followed a fairly similar pattern until the end of the
period
.
However
, the highest rate of all
the
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ages belonged to elderly people throughout the whole time frame.
While
respectively, the lowest rate was recorded for the youngest group. Between the first five years, all the percentages had an increase, but not as sharp as the group
age
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24 to 34 (the highest in 1995, about 40% of them). From the beginning of 1995 until 2000, they all interestingly fell and witnessed their lowest rate over the
period
in 2000. By the
next
five years, the figure showed a notable and significant rise for all groups by the year 2005. The recordings progressively continued to grow up by getting the
last
time
period
, with the exception of the ages 24 to 34 that was remaining steady.

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