Present a written argument or case study to an educational reader with no specialised knowledge of the following topic: The overuse of natural resources causes an ultimate exhaust of them. People have been using them to be in the swim of new styles such as making new furniture of recent design. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Therefore, the government should discourage people the overuse of these resources. To what extent do you support or oppose the idea?

Natural resources represent the human capital in our world.
Westing
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Wasting
natural
trasures
accumulated wealth in the form of money or jewels etc.
treasures
treasure
makes them end up.
humankind
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Humankind
have been using
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has been using
has used
them to create fashionable styles like new antiques.
This
made an enormous bad effect on the environment.
As a result
, the government should prevent humanity to exhaust these resources, In
this
essay I will support
this
point of view and will discuss why I do.
First
and foremost, natural treasures exists in the nature with a limited amount.
For
example fossil
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example, fossil
fuel has
an
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a
calculated international
reserve which
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reserve, which
can not
can not
cannot
be reproduced.
This
is
beacause
for the reason that; on account of
because
it has been created over 100 0f
milions
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million
millions
of years in the past. When community exhausts the natural resources without accurate planning regarding the rights on the
next
generations to benefit from these resources as we did, It will
results
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result
in contamination of the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
and will put the
next
generations in a very bad situation to discover new
matrials
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
materials
to satisfy their needs
in addition
to solving the
environments
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environmental
environment
issues which have been created by their parents. Honest use of natural resources will push society to discover new
matrials
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
materials
and benefit from reusable energy sources, which will help the community distributes the sources of
matrials
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
materials
.
For example
,
instead
of using papers which reduces the size of forests in the world, new
scientests
a person with advanced knowledge of one or more sciences
scientists
scientist
have created the tablets and electronic
note books
a book with blank pages for recording notes or memoranda
notebooks
to help students and researches record their studies
instead
of exhausting the world's natural lungs. As a
results
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result
, Community used the creativity to solve the limited resources problem, that will
effect
have an effect upon
affect
all generations, one after another. To conclude, No one can deny the right for the
next
generations to enjoy the natural resources as all do, and the only way out to do
this
is to carefully use the natural
trasures
accumulated wealth in the form of money or jewels etc.
treasures
treasure
and use technology to find alternatives that help society and do not harm the environment.
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