The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of people visiting a local cinema in a particular European country on various days in a week in the year
of
2003, 2005 and 2007.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it is noticeable that Saturdays are the most crowded and considered to be the peak in all three
years
and recorded as approximately just below 40% in 2003, fewer than 45% in 2005 and between 40% to 45% in 2007.
Generally, In
Mondays Change preposition
On
smaller
number of people visited the cinema in all Correct article usage
a smaller
three
years
but Wednesdays in 2007 are the lowest recorded according to
the given data. However
, Tuesdays between 15% and 20% (for all three
years
) and Thursdays between 10% and 25% (for all three
years
) had an increased number of people in contrast
to Monday
and Fix the agreement mistake
Mondays
Wednesday
.
Fix the agreement mistake
Wednesdays
Subsequently
, on Fridays
a Add a comma
,Fridays
leveled
percentage was captured in 2003, 2005 and 2007 and it was figured as 30% respectively. Change the spelling
levelled
Additionally
, on Sundays in 2003, also
it was recorded at 30%, further
it increased Add a comma
,further
on
2005 and 2007 between 30% and 35%.Change preposition
in
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