While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem witch we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.

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These days, when our world is developing in a faster way than ever before on the same time we have some disadvantages of it. Global warming and deforestation are some of the main problems of modern way of living. In

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essay we will discuss about both difficulties.

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, we have to explain what are the global warming and deforestation. The polluted air caused the global warming. It destroys the ozone layer. The ozone layer protects us from UV radiation and if it destroyed UV rays warm our planet more that we need. The result is the ice caps on the poles start melting and sea level comes higher. If the sea level is higher, floods become. The scientists said Miami will disappear if global warming continues. Deforestation is another one complication. We cut the forests because we want to build the building. We aren’t aware how much important the forests are. They guarantee fresh air an protect us from strong wind. Unfortunately, if we don’t stop cutting forest, we will have

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with tornados. Tornados will exterminate all constructions that we already built and we will be at the beginning again. In conclusion, I think people all around the world are concerned. If we want to acquire the natural peace in the world, we have to solve both problems. We can’t say which issue is more important, both of them are connected to each other. Just if we keep our nature, we will have fresher air an less dilemma with global warming and deforestation.

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While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem witch we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

benedicta: Question : Some people believe that Is best to accept a bad situation such as, unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think that hard work and determination bring success. Others think other factors such as money and good appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Many people join distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does.

Task 2 In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.