Nowadays many job seekers are finding jobs that force them to move for from their family and friends. Is it a positive or a negative trend? What can be done about it?

To begin
with, a lot of people believe they can earn higher incomes by working overseas.
As a result
, living standards and economic conditions for their families will improve, especially for people who migrate to developed countries from
third
world countries. There are,
by comparison
, other negative aspects that people should remember. The family members have a chance of a
cultural
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culture
shock, because there could be certain rituals and practices that do not suit them. To overcome
this
problem, families should learn
common language
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the common language
a common language
about the land to which they are going. It will minimize the "cultural shock" and help avoid unpleasant accidents. Family members should
also
have an idea about the country's laws and rules prior to travel.
This
should avoid law-related issues. Photography of government buildings or monuments,
for example
, is a criminal offence in some countries.
Second
, living far away from your loved ones could cause depression in some people. It takes time to get to know an area and make friends, particularly at the start, so people begin to feel lonely.
For example
, if the person is older, beginning a relationship becomes much harder, because everyone else has already established their social circles. In
this
case,
however
, employers do play an important role. Since businesses recruit people from
abroad they
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abroad, they
can plan for a smoother transition. Employers,
for example
, may require monthly offs for workers so they could visit families, at least for the
first
months.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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