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The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015

The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015
#information #children #two #schools
The table compares information on the figure of
students
 from 2 schools who had various difficulties in 2005 and 2015.
Overall
, what is observed from the graph is that
students
' biggest complication is following
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instruction
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 in
school
 A
while
this
 sum is dramatically lower in jail
B
 in 2005. Another interesting thing is that in both years institute
B
 witnessed markedly fewer
statistic
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 of
students
 who face problems than
academy
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 for. Turning into the details of 2005 , 22
students
 didn't have enough skills in reading whilst
this
 was
lowest
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 total in institution A.
While
 only 5
students
 from academy
B
was
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 not capable
in
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 spelling, university A had 6 times as
much
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students
 who had spelling problems as institute
B
.The noticeable difference was seen between schools in the number of
students
 who didn't follow instructions (42 for
school
 A and 6 for
school
B
) With regard to the date
of
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2015 , 18 children from
school
 A could not concentrate
lessons
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 and follow instructions which
is
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 not
as
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 important
issue
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 as others. Surprisingly, in
hall
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 A most
student
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 had a handwriting
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problem complication
 (28),
while
 only 7
students
 need to solve
this
 dilemma in faculty
B
.
However
, the biggest challenge for hall
students
 was
a
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 verbal expression of ideas and concentration in lessons (15)
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, school, b with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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