The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The given chart illustrates the number of students who take part

of

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in

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5 different leisure activities.

Overall

, we can say

that

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that boy

those boys

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boys

took the majority of these activities.

It is clear that

the most popular leisure activity among

this

age group is watching television almost all children in Australia watch tv in their free time,

However

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in

the

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three of the four other activities,

Boys

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Boys'

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participation was significantly greater than

girls

. The

next

most popular activity is playing computer games with 80% of the

boys

and 60% of the

girls

, bike riding follows computer games in terms of popularity, just under

three quarters

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three-quarters

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of

boys

say they like cycling and just under

two thirds

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two-thirds

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girls

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of girls

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say so, The only activity which

girls

chose more than

boys

is Art and craft with just over 50 per cent of

girls

like to draw compared to only about 40 per cent of

boys

. The figures are showing that

the

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boys

being

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are

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more active and

girls

more

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are more

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creative in Australia.