The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010
The bar chart gives information
in
different education levels in the UK in 2010.
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Women predominated
schools for children.Add a hyphen
Women-predominated
This
it
was particularly true, having over 95 per cent in Correct pronoun usage
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nursery
and over 90 per cent in primary school as female teachers
Men and women were equally represented in teaching institutions regarding older children: secondary Add an article
the nursery
a nursery
school
and colleges. Colleges were 50 per cent male and female.
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schools
However
, men held a larger number in higher level education institutions, particularly true for male
with twice as many males Fix the agreement mistake
males
were
teaching staff than femaleUnnecessary verb
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