In films and computer games violence has become more popular. Some people think this has negative effects on society, other think it is harmless relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

entertainment industry
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The entertainment industry
Entertainment industry
lately gains
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has lately gained
more space in our community life. Movies and video games with
violence
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violent
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
aquire
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
acquire
more popularity
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more popular
day after another which is welcomed by a considerable sector of
society but
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society, but
I support the other point of view which says it has a bad effect on
society
. Computer games and movies
is
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are
an essential part of modern home these days which have very limited control
from
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of
parents and
wisemen
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wise men
of the
society
.
Violance
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Violent
Violence
content offered to under age on media will give them the
easyiest
posing no difficulty; requiring little effort
easiest
way to solve their problems they face. For
instatance
an occurrence of something
instance
the
tuff
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Tuff
reactions records
has been increased
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have been increased
dramatically during the
last
decade.
This
made the tenderness values go down in the
periority
status established in order of importance or urgency
priority
list of
society
principles which spreads the values of isolation as a response to avoid the consequences of
violance
an act of aggression (as one against a person who resists)
violence
that may
happend
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happen
happened
, which I don't think
this
has helped
society
to develop their role model.
On the other hand
violance
an act of aggression (as one against a person who resists)
violence
genres movies and video games
has affected
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have affected
the values and principles of the role model which should be presented to the
society
. How the creative solutions may be developed to solve conflict
instead
of the easy solution
offer
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offered
by the power of arms.
For
example colaborative
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example, collaborative
example collaborative
agreements made to solve community internal fights will save the
society
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society's
integrity and encourage all the community sectors to share their ideas to solve their problems. To conclude, violance content is spreading over time which I believe
this
will not be the best content to be delivered to develop a healthy
society
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