Task 1 the diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the current -making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The provided information about
the
how Correct article usage
apply
cement
is produced by following different steps and equipments
for producing concrete for making buildings is depicted by the given diagrams.
Glancing at provided illustration, it can be seen thoroughly, in the case of Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
cement
production, a large amount of limestone and clay is collected. Then
, it is crushed for receiving the mixture as
a Change preposition
in
power
form. Correct your spelling
powder
Afterthat
, it is mixed in a rotating heater.After heating, Correct your spelling
After that
this
mixture is grinded
and Correct your spelling
ground
cement
is produced. following
this
, this
cement
is put into the bags for selling
.
Having a quick glance towards the production of concrete, Replace the word
sale
firstly
, 15%cement
and 10%water are mixed in a bigger chamber. Moreover
, only 25%sand and 50%gravel like small pieces of stones
are used Fix the agreement mistake
stone
to
Change preposition
in
this
process. Interestingly , after mixing these materials, concrete
mixture is done for using building purposes and making homes.
Add an article
the concrete
Overall
, all the steps are very essential for both processes. If one of the step
is omitted, Change to a plural noun
steps
then
the entire process will be halt
.Wrong verb form
halted
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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