Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Keeping everything we use organized and
in particular
places is an essential habit in which our parents want us to practice from our childhood. I see it as a
life
skill that must be improved in any human being which makes our lives a comfortable one in many ways. Sometimes it is very bothersome when we are not well organized. When I was small I had an unstoppable bad habit of throwing my comb here and there after using it. One day I was getting ready to go to a talent show at my school suddenly I notice my comb had been misplaced and I was so panicked thinking the place where I threw it to. I had to spend more than one hour to find it and
finally
I couldn’t be there for my dancing item on time. I cried a lot as I couldn’t dance with my friends in front of my parents. That I thoroughly understood the harm of my bad habit to my
life
. A tidy apartment, a house or even a work place is pleasant to see. Members
in
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of
a family who live in a tidy
environment develop
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environment, develop
the love and affection
among
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between
each other. Colleagues at the office work together without quarrelling when the working environment is tidy. What is the reason for
this
? Psychologists have the answer.
That is
, many researches done by them have proved the effect of the nature of living place on the mental state of humans. I have one of my fellow teachers at my school hasn’t been brought up with good habits. She leaves left over food on the staff table without dumping them
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
the
dust bin
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dustbin
. Everyone in the staffroom doesn’t like keeping company with her. And once the principal had caught
lot
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lots
of mistakes in the papers she had set for kids.
This
teacher is a nice
example who
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example, who
ruins her career
life
and social relationships by being untidy. We don’t need to be well educated to practice
this
skill, but if you train your mind for being tidy in your daily
routine it
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routine, it
would be a
jewelry
an adornment (as a bracelet or ring or necklace) made of precious metals and set with gems (or imitation gems)
jewellery
which add a glory and shine to your
life
and if you are a person without
this
quality, you know from experience how troublesome your
life
is.
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