average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in London, Sydney and New york.

From the graph, in
general we
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general, we
can see average monthly temperatures in London, New
York
, and Sydney. In London, from
january
the first month of the year; begins 10 days after the winter solstice
January
to august
temperature
is slightly rising and going down from
august
the month following July and preceding September
August
to
december
the last (12th) month of the year
December
.
Peak
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The peak
of the London
temperature
is above 20
degree
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degrees
and below 25
degree
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degrees
.
Lowest
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The low
The lowest
temperature
is 5
degree
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degrees
. In New
york
the English royal house (a branch of the Plantagenet line) that reigned from 1461 to 1485; its emblem was a white rose
York
, starting from
january
the first month of the year; begins 10 days after the winter solstice
January
in 5
degree
to 30
degree
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degrees
in
july
the month following June and preceding August
July
is the rising part of
this
graph. As same as London, from
july
the month following June and preceding August
July
to
december
the last (12th) month of the year
December
temperature
is going down to 5
degree
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degrees
. In Sydney, the graph is slightly
fluctuational
other than 2 other cities. In
january
the first month of the year; begins 10 days after the winter solstice
January
,
sydney's
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Sydney's
temperature
is 25
degree
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degrees
and slightly going down to 15
degree
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degrees
in
july
the month following June and preceding August
July
.
Then
in
july
the month following June and preceding August
July
to
december
the last (12th) month of the year
December
temperature
is rising again to 25
degree
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degrees
. From
table
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a table
tables
, comparing to Sydney and London, New
york
the English royal house (a branch of the Plantagenet line) that reigned from 1461 to 1485; its emblem was a white rose
York
is
the most sunny
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the sunniest
city. New
york's
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yorks'
Yorks'
general hours of sunshine in per year is 2535. After New
york
the English royal house (a branch of the Plantagenet line) that reigned from 1461 to 1485; its emblem was a white rose
York
, Sydney is the
second
sunny
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sunniest
city. In
last
London has 1180 hours in per year
.
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.
In general, New
york
the English royal house (a branch of the Plantagenet line) that reigned from 1461 to 1485; its emblem was a white rose
York
is
the great
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the greatest
city to visit if you're into dry sun and long sunny days.

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