Write about the following topic: All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause? How can we overcome the problems of poverty? Use specific reason and example to explain to your answers. You should write at least 250 words.

I think it is completely true and we can immediately decide on these problematic situations. If
this
continues to more timing, it will be more to different rich and poor countries. I have 2 reasons to be about that. The
first
one
is to be a fair competition. Every day, every country is developing gradually and more. New technologies appear more quickly in the 21st century. Powerful countries have new technologies more than poor countries and for implementing all kinds of big projects have chosen the best
one
for the competition from other companies and countries. Unfortunately, most of the big projects had chosen for rich countries because of new technologies and more experiences.
This
situation gives a chance to develop more
for
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in
other countries. I think we should change to
this
system for developing poor countries. Another
one
is to be a
market
place. If you notice, the
population
directly depends on country
development
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developer
developers
.
On the other hand
, it means your
countries
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country's
population
is large, it may be a more developed country. Because more
population
has a more
market
like China, India, etc.
For example
, so many production factories want to sell countries that have more
population
. As like
this
, you have a production to want to sell, you want to go to more
market
countries. Even though, poor countries should increase to new factories. Country of manufacture is easy to develop to sell other countries to their production. Maybe those countries can save more time to develop.
Also
, we should be more educated. It is so important to a condition in my view. Because, you have a high ability as creating new apps, technologies,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
, you can sell your programs to the world
market
via the internet. And
then
, I think that countries should increase to the research
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
.
Powerful research center
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Powerful research centres
Powerful research centre
can appear more quickly new things as a vaccine, things what we need. Increasing the
population
is a too difficult process in our generation for developing poor countries. That’s why, when we increase to research
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
, factories, and education, we can compete
in
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with
rich countries. I want to say
one
sentence is “the education is the most powerful weapon to change in the world”.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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