Write about the following topic: All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause? How can we overcome the problems of poverty? Use specific reason and example to explain to your answers. You should write at least 250 words.

I think it is completely true and we can immediately decide on these problematic situations. If

this

continues to more timing, it will be more to different rich and poor countries. I have 2 reasons to be about that. The

first

one

is to be a fair competition. Every day, every country is developing gradually and more. New technologies appear more quickly in the 21st century. Powerful countries have new technologies more than poor countries and for implementing all kinds of big projects have chosen the best

one

for the competition from other companies and countries. Unfortunately, most of the big projects had chosen for rich countries because of new technologies and more experiences.

This

situation gives a chance to develop more

for

Suggestion

other countries. I think we should change to

this

system for developing poor countries. Another

one

is to be a

market

place. If you notice, the

population

directly depends on country

development

Suggestion

developer

developers

On the other hand

, it means your

countries

Suggestion

country's

population

is large, it may be a more developed country. Because more

population

has a more

market

like China, India, etc.

For example

, so many production factories want to sell countries that have more

population

. As like

this

, you have a production to want to sell, you want to go to more

market

countries. Even though, poor countries should increase to new factories. Country of manufacture is easy to develop to sell other countries to their production. Maybe those countries can save more time to develop.

Also

, we should be more educated. It is so important to a condition in my view. Because, you have a high ability as creating new apps, technologies,

etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

, you can sell your programs to the world

market

via the internet. And

then

, I think that countries should increase to the research

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

Powerful research center

Suggestion

Powerful research centres

Powerful research centre

can appear more quickly new things as a vaccine, things what we need. Increasing the

population

is a too difficult process in our generation for developing poor countries. That’s why, when we increase to research

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

, factories, and education, we can compete

Suggestion

with

rich countries. I want to say

one

sentence is “the education is the most powerful weapon to change in the world”.

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In a nutshell
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Write about the following topic: All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause? How can we overcome the problems of poverty? Use specific reason and example to explain to your answers. You should write at least 250 words.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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