in some areas of US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

"Curfew" is a law enacted, limiting the public to go out of their houses. And there are some areas, where teenagers are not allowed to go out at night, unless they are accompanied by an adult. In my opinion, I agree with the statement, on following reasons.
To begin
with, there are places, which are not safer for young children to be,
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
at night. Most of these are with high rate of criminal offences.
Thus
, the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
see
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sees
not letting youngsters out after dark, as one mechanism to protect them.
For instance
, there
is
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are
a variety of people, who wish to make
teenages
any movable possession (especially articles of clothing)
things
their ultimate target. One group is the drug dealers, who easily target young children to get on with their business.
Moreover
, the local gangs
also
keep an eye on them, trying to get them involved in their activities. The reason behind is, that teenagers being
in
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at
the age where they always try to explore and do new adventures.
Thus
, they have become,
voulnerale
susceptible to attack
vulnerable
and easy target for many criminal heads. Moving forward, the compulsory rule of going out with an adult, has made them safer, because there is protection.
In other words
adults are more experienced, and have a thorough knowledge
on
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of
society situations. They get the feeling when something bad is going to happen and they can always realize from the changes around them.
Further
, the are clear on what they communicate and act
professionaly
in a professional manner
professionally
professional
professionals
when dealing with others, where as teenagers might lack most of the qualities.
Hence
, having an adult with them at night when they go out, will surely protect them from any harm. To conclude, I firmly believe, the imposes 'curfew' is a good decision made by
authorities
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the authorities
for the protection of teenagers.
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