You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Dear Mr, I am writing to World
Tennis
Club in reference to an advertisement I saw in The Times
last
Sunday, February 17 for a
tennis
course
.
First
, my name is Lama, I am studying physical education at London University and I have one year left for graduation. I was looking for a
tennis
course
because I would like to be a
tennis
coach later and I found your advertisement
last
week.
Second
, I have some problems with
this
course
as it lasts for 6 weeks and I can attend for four weeks only because I have to study for my exams.
Furthermore
, I have to work on my graduation project by the end of March.
Third
, I want to ask about the payment policy as I will not attend the full
course
, so may I pay
two
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third
of the fees which is 600 Pounds? I can pay it immediately whenever I will start with cash.
Finally
, thanks for your time and effort and I will be waiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Lama Jaljouli
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