You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: - give details about the order you made - explain what was wrong with the item - tell the company what you want them to do about it Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that
last
Monday I had ordered an iPhone cover through your eCommerce website. And I got it delivered today and I am more disappointed with the product
that is
delivered as it was not the expected product and
moreover
it is in an unusable state. To be more precise, I have ordered it using your Electronic gadget website using my PayPal account. My order number is 2239783. Herewith, I have enclosed my receipt copy for your perusal. The description reads it is a genuine leather cover
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fits perfectly in an iPhone 8 plus mobile. Unfortunately, it doesn't fit securely
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my device.
Moreover
, the cover doesn't look genuine.
Hence
I concur that it is a manufacturing flaw. To proceed
further
, I am expecting you to resend an ineffective product
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free of charge, as I like the design and the look of the cover very much.
Otherwise
, I would opt for getting a full refund. Providing you have any concerns
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, I will prefer to contact
PayPal
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compliance team, in case I haven't got any reply from you within the
next
one week of time. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Ganesh.
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