Some say that the best way to help poor countries is financial aids. Other say other forms of aid should be given. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Every country has three levels of status of living, through which its economic growth is analysed. One is high class, the other as middle class and the
last
, the poor. It's a known fact that except the
first
category, the latter two need help from the government or people, in order to meet their minimum requirements. While people of middle class look for financial aids, they expect medical support, as well. Well, in
this
context, aid does not mean only financially, but, in fact, includes other exigencies like food, clothing, a tiny shelter, protection from drowning in rains and so on. Many parts of the World are focus-centric on the supply of
such
necessities in times of natural calamities like rain, lack of drinking water, etc.,. An exemplar of
this
is India, where in, when Kerela got suddenly flooded in 2018, it's absurd to the situation of the state. Almost everything is smashed due to continuous heavy rains for months together. Drastic changes have come as a cause of
this
,
besides
, many lives lost, people got killed, vehicles scattered, houses collapsed and many more negative impacts were seen. Continuing, people lost their identities and starved for prey and shelter. In
such
scenario not only the Kerala government took many huge steps to rescue them in a safe place, but
also
, vital things were supplied by the Non-Government Organisations (NGOs). There is a remarkable record of helping hands stretched to refrain the needy, even from the bottom of the lanes till the Nation. Each and every individual took the responsibility in a very high impressive subtlety. Similar is the case when Japan, China, some parts of India and Indonesia were caught with Tsunami which perished the natural resources of the places and led to fatalities, indeed, they received an awesome global support in rescue and recovery. To summarize, in my opinion, every individual has to take up
such
tasks, with utmost respect, come forward share the ideas or support to the government, so that, proper utilization can be done.
Also
, I strongly insist on multiple provisions as aforesaid, apart from monetary terms, as most of the conditions may not allow purchasing or movements, at times.

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