The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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With a population of 65,000 people, Garlsdon

town

is drafting a plan to establish a new supermarket. Two potential sites are being considered, one at the heart of the

town

(referred

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S2) and the other

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the

country side

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countryside

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(referred

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S1).

Site

S2 is placed in the vast industrial area of the

town

where the railway line passes through. The proposed S2

site

is a

town

centre and no traffic zone. It is

16kms

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16 km

away from Brandson which has a population of 15,000 and

25kms

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25 km

from Cransdon with a population of 29,000 by a main road. Both these areas are southwest and southeast of Garlsdon

town

respectively.

This

location is very close to all the housing residents and industrial workers.

Site

S1 is in the countryside away from the hustle and bustle and is

12kms

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12 km

away from Hindon.

This

will be very close to

people

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of Hindon which has a headcount of 10,000.

This

site

if selected, will be located on the northwest side of Garlsdon

town

. Though both the sites have their own advantages, the pros of S2

out-weigh

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outweigh

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the pros of S1. S2 is easily accessible to more people as it is situated right in the heart of

town

Also

, there are 2 areas

close-by

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close by

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where the majority of the

citizens'

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citizens

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lives

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live

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and have access both by rail and road.

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