Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem

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Today, in

this

modern world globalization has been increasing rapidly at

fast pace

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a fast pace

. In order to run along with

this

competitive world people are busy in working most of their time in a day. As money is essential for our survival, not a single day goes without working. Many people are struggling to get free time for the exercise to keep their lives healthy. The main reason for

this

longest

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long

longer

working hours. Employers need to reduce the working hours to employees so that they will have some time to concentrate on their physical self too. The one more reason for people finding difficulty to get exercise is travelling longest distances to their workplaces,

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is making them too tired to do

ther

of them or themselves

their

the

other

work at home. And coming to job types people are doing

now a days

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

is mostly sitting

infront

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in front

computer

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a computer

the computer

for

longer

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long

hours.

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is a serious concern because it doesn't involve any physical work, which have

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one or some or every or all without specification

any

adverse effects on their health.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem

Include an introduction and conclusion

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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Governments around the world spend too much money on treating illnesses and diseases and not enough on health education and prevention. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some believe that it is good for a country’s culture to import films and TV programmes, while others think it is better for a country to have their own films and TV programmes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future careers. Others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.