People often do not interact with their neighbours and this is harming communities. What are the possible cause and solutions?

#people #neighbours #communities

The

first

map illustrates how Stokeford looked in 1930, while the

second

map shows its appearance in 2010. The

city

has undergone major changes and much of the farmland has been replaced by houses. The

city

is located on the eastern bank of river stoke. The bridge connecting the

city

to the western bank of the river is still there. In 1930, the

city

had a single

road

connecting the southern end of the

city

to the bridge and a few houses

were situated

Suggestion

was situated

adjacent to the

road

on the northern side, whereas in 2010, new branching roads were laid to provide connectivity to the new housing. The post

office which

Accept comma addition

office, which

was present on the

western

Suggestion

west

side of

road

Suggestion

the road

was not modified.

Also

the primary school was extended with two other new blocks and shops adjacent to the post office were removed for laying a new

road

. Farmlands lying in the southern and north-eastern ends occupied a major portion of the village in 1930, while in 2010 they were replaced by houses. The

garden’s

Suggestion

garden

area is reduced to half over the time to

accomodate

be agreeable or acceptable to

accommodate

more houses and a large house in the garden was modified to a retirement house.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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