The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the
amount
of fuel exports and cost, food and produced goods Change the quantifier
number
export
by a country between 2000 to 2005.
Wrong verb form
exported
It is clear that
the demand for material falls significantly, but rise
dramatically over the years. Correct subject-verb agreement
rises
Moreover
, rate
of electricity, cuisines and manufactured stocks fluctuates or Correct article usage
the rate
decrease
Correct subject-verb agreement
decreases
along
the period.
In 2000, Change preposition
over
output
of gas of electricity exports was 300000 million and suddenly fall down in Add an article
the output
next
two years Correct article usage
the next
at
250000. Change preposition
to
Then
we saw that in 2005 it rises quickly at
425000.
In Change preposition
to
year
2000 the expense Change the article
the year
of
ammunition and meal were 400000 and 180000 Change preposition
for
millions
respectively. In the general exportation of oil decreased steeply at 200000 in 2005 and Change to singular
million
stock
of snacks few more than Correct article usage
the stock
the
200000.
Correct article usage
apply
In contrast
, manufactured goods remain constant during the 5 years at 400000.Submitted by love1999mahal on
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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