These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teacher, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

In recent years, in many nations, the number of people who choose teaching to become their career is decreasing significantly.
This
problem is caused by some factors, and it could be tackled by some effective measures.
First
of all, the most common reason for that problem is the number of
job
opening
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openings
is not enough for new graduate students, annually. While society's need for technology, engineering or medical is increasing, there are many excessive teachers in the education system. That leads to the opportunity of new graduate students is extremely low and they have to choose another
job
instead
of
teacher
although
they study to become teachers.
Moreover
, generally speaking,
teacher
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the teacher
is a low-paid
job
.
For example
, in Vietnam, the salary of teachers
have slightly increased
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has slightly increased
in recent years, but to compare with
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
jobs, it is still a huge gap. The
second
factor which
make
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makes
people tend not to become a
teacher
is the demand of
this
job
. Teachers have to design the teaching script, search information, prepare books and pictures about the
next
lesson, review the student's exam… They
also
have to do their housework and take care of their children.
Although
the teaching assistants and the technological elements are developing strongly, the workload of the teachers is still great.
Furthermore
, nowadays, some teenagers behave very badly in school, it seems clear that children do not have the same respect for
teacher
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teachers
the teacher
as in the past.
That is
also
a reason why people are afraid to become teachers, especially secondary school teachers. To deal with
this
fact, the government
play
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plays
an important role in improving the education system in order to attract more people. Paying raise, using recognition and reward, reducing the amount of
teacher
's work by computers or assistants,… are highly necessary.
Besides
, parents should take
responsible
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responsibility
for teaching their children respect adults, especially teachers.
In addition
, themselves - the parents should become a well-behaved person with their
children's
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child's
teacher
. In conclusion, there are many reasons for the decrease in the number of people want to become
teacher
nowadays,
such
as: salary, life balance, student's
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
,
job
opportunities,… And it can be solved by combination of teachers, government, parents and students,… The improvement of
education system
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the education system
can attract more talents come back in order to spread their knowledge to
next generation
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the next generation
next generations
.
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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