In many places women are taking jobs, which are traditionally done by men. What do you think make these changes happen? What’s your opinion about it?

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There is a significant rise in the demand of male-dominated job positions by females in several areas.

This

essay will

first

discuss the reason for the increase in

this

trend and

further

agrees that women getting employed in jobs

conventionaly

in a conventional manner

conventionally

done by men

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are

beneficial as it will ensure

thaat

pointing out something

that

jobs are offered to worthy candidates irrespective of gender, followed by a reasoned conclusion. The principal cause of the women grabbing jobs done by males is the change in the thinking of the society.

This

is to say, earlier people has a belief that

womne

an adult female person (as opposed to a man)

women

are responsible for taking care of the family,

hence

, they were not supported by their parents to study.

However

, as the time changed, girls are given

equaly

having the same quantity, value, or measure as another

equal

importance as their counterpart. They are encouraged to not only complete their post graduation but

also

to build a successful career.

As a result

, women consider themselves to be no less than men and apply for jobs which were considered suitable for men. To elucidate, a recent study by The Times

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March 2017 showed that more than 80 percent of females are taking jobs traditionally carried our by males.

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In many places women are taking jobs, which are traditionally done by men. What do you think make these changes happen? What’s your opinion about it?

Include an introduction and conclusion

It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people. Do you agree or disagree?

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some people say that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than benefits? Do you agree or disagree?

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