Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Nowadays, online shopping becoming more common and popular to people in different countries especially, for those who are more familiar with using the internet. Many people argued that
this
has many drawbacks, but I believe that its advantages are much higher compared to its negative aspects.
Firstly
, Consuming less
time
while buying any customs from the internet is the most positive advantage especially these days. While we are living in fast-growing communities, the
time
is extremely expensive to waste it while you are standing in shopping rows in order to pay for your items or either selecting your goods.
Furthermore
, lots of
time
will be wasted in traffic congestion if you choose to buy your item by yourself.
Secondly
, many people thought that online shopping has some negative aspects
such
as putting you under risk of fake websites, but during these days and with the growing of different bunches of software specialized in that kind of shopping it will be common easy to overcome
such
struggles where it insures the website safety before using it or entering your financial data.
Moreover
, by using more popular websites,
such
as Amazon and Alibaba, would decrease the probability of doing any fake purchased. In conclusion, using the internet today for buying different kind of things is significantly important and have more advantageous compared to any disadvantageous from it specially for the developed countries where it save times, efforts and
also
allow you to perform several tasks at minimal
time
and less efforts at the same
time
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