Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Teaching methodologies in recent years have changed drastically. Digital learning has changed the mindset of people in
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a positive way
positive way
positive ways
way
.
Likewise
, many contemporary masses and myself believes e-learning should be motivated
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however opponents
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however, opponents
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believe
conventional
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the conventional way
way
of reading should remain
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the primary base
of education. To embark on
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,
primary reason
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the primary reason
of choosing online material is the availability of
myriad
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a myriad
of resources at single place due to advancement in science and technology in recent times.
For example
, e-learning applications like BYJU's
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,
udemy
,
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unacademy
and
coursera
a huntsman who hunts small animals with fast dogs that use sight rather than scent to follow their prey
coursers
courser a
runs courses which persuade students from schools to colleges to visually access their syllabus in a lucid
way
.
Thus
, students find
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a new way
new ways
way
of learning quite interesting and thrilling. Another reason would be the appropriate use of
time
.To illustrate it
further
, students can easily manage their
time
by using electronic dictionaries which are easily available on their mobile phones or on internet without wasting
time
while searching a meaning of a particular word in a printed dictionary.
Lastly
, it would aid in improving the environment.If fewer papers are used in printing the books, fewer trees would be cut down
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,
which ultimately reduces the universal problem of global warming.
However
,
traditional method
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the traditional method
traditional methods
of
learing
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
still exist in
this
era and many people still thinks it is the most appropriate
way
of learning.
Firstly
, studying through printed material increases the concentration level of an individual which might not be always possible in digital mean because most of the
time
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individuals
get distracted due to popup windows.
Secondly
, it is easily available in the market at reasonable prices
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which might not be in the case of e-learning.For an instance, people have to pay
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a hefty amount
for the access of various online courses which might not be possible for every class of the state.So, it demotes egalitarian culture.
Last
but not the least, digital means have an abysmal impact on the eyes due to
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use of screen while learning. To conclude, both contemporary and conventional
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ways
of learning have their own advantages and
disadvantages but
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disadvantages, but
I personally go
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by
electronics means of learning as it
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more convenient
and easy to use even though it comes at hefty amount.

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