In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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In the modern world, the old people expected life is rising.

Although

, it is a positive trend, but a section of people believes that it leads to various problems that are faced by government and the younger generation. I will explain these problems and solutions in the following paragraphs, before making my point of view and reaching on logical conclusion.

To begin

with, the most predominant problem is pension and health care expenditure of old

age

people. In some countries, even in the current world, retirement

age

is 50-55, in

this

life, people become a burden on the government and they have to pay pension and health care charges. To tackle

this

issue legal authorities should increase the retirement period of the people, because 50-55

age

of persons are healthy and they can still work,

therefore

the government should increase the

age

65 years,

instead

of 55.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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