In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

In the modern world, the old people expected life is rising.
Although
, it is a positive trend, but a section of people believes that it leads to various problems that are faced by government and the younger generation. I will explain these problems and solutions in the following paragraphs, before making my point of view and reaching on logical conclusion.
To begin
with, the most predominant problem is pension and health care expenditure of old
age
people. In some countries, even in the current world, retirement
age
is 50-55, in
this
life, people become a burden on the government and they have to pay pension and health care charges. To tackle
this
issue legal authorities should increase the retirement period of the people, because 50-55
age
of persons are healthy and they can still work,
therefore
the government should increase the
age
65 years,
instead
of 55.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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