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In "Many Faces of madness", a shorten documentary written by Amar Kanwar, natural recourses have been destroyed by human’s greediness.

For instance

, four centuries ago local irrigation was established by

Indian ancestor

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an Indian ancestor

in order to harness common water; yet, when everyone has belong land the water system became a desert because of capitalism.

This

shows the current impact of

human’s

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human

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

such

as deforestation, mangrove destruction and

overexploitation

which damage biodiversity and do harm to the environment.

This

phenomenon does not only occur in India, but it is

also

widespread around the world.

Similarly

, Thailand has faced a lot of environmental problems, which becomes a very significant government's concern.

For example

, some capitalists cut down lots of trees in

conserved forest

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a conserved forest

so as to set up their own businesses

such

as resorts or hotels.

This

action is illegal and the government should solve

this

problem by promulgating the set of environmental rules and punishing seriously anyone against it.

In addition

, huge heaps of chemical waste was were found nearby local watercourse, which can

affects

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affect

native communities. It is seen that there is a huge amount of household waste

in most of capital

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in most capital

cities.

For instance

, Bangkok, which is the capital city of Thailand, has suffered severe water pollution because of a lot of waste dumped into the rivers. It is not only freshwater animals’

harmfulness

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harmful

it can affect human health

also

. To put it in a nutshell, environmental problems are common problems of all

humandkind

all of the living human inhabitants of the earth

humankind

because they can cause

butterfly effect

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a butterfly effect

which can affect other countries as well.

Hence

, not only does the government have responsibility for

environment

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environmental

protection and conservation, but each individual should

also

contribute to help the environment.

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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