You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news

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Dear Sara, I'm very intrigued and excited that I'm writing to you about my new job. As you already know, I've always aspired to work for Google because my previous company was not prospering and I didn't stand a chance to get promoted in the future. I was

also

unsatisfied with their payment rates and not having a maternity leave. Now at Google, not only I'm constantly exposed to new opportunities and promotions, but

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I am

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way more than before.

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, I have more paid holidays and I am entitled to

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six-month maternity leave. Thanks to my high income, now I am planning to move to a luxurious flat in uptown in September.

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is why I am throwing a party

week on Saturday inviting all of my friends. I would be more than happy if you could be there with me to celebrate my new achievement. Please write me back as soon as you receive my letter and let me know if you are coming. With love, Betty

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news

The Closing

the percentage of overweight children in western societies has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution.

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In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered effective ways of maintaining links with the past. How effective can traditional costumes be, in this sense? What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country’s past?

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future. such as those related to science and technology. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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