You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. Use following points: 1. What is the article about? 2. What is the error? 3. What you expect an editor to do?

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Dear Sir, I am writing in respect of a mistake I discovered while reading an article published by

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2019. It was a biography of a renowned Igbo business tycoon, Chief Ekenedilichukwu Osita. Actually, I am a fan of the paper, especially the business part, and it was in the process that I discovered a mistake on page twelve. Coincidentally, I grew up with

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Osita. So, I am in the right position to point out the error I came across in your article. It read that he left ‘Anambra’, his home town for the city at the age of twelve, and he

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studied Electrical Engineering at the University of Uyo in 1970.

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information is not correct because we both left Anambra at the tender age of seven and graduated from Nnamdi Azikiwe University as Business Administrators in 1980.

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, I have attached a copy of our class album in order to prove my case and I hope that

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effected

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in your

article. I

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implore that

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investigation is carried out in order to trace my claims. I hope to receive a response from you soon. Yours faithfully, Udemezue

oluoma

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Wed Oct 13 2021

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You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. Use following points: 1. What is the article about? 2. What is the error? 3. What you expect an editor to do?

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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