Is Nuclear Power a boon or a bane? Do you agree or disagree?

It is difficult to say that nuclear
power
is good or bad, since the nuclear
power
has positive sides and negative sides. Nuclear
power
is considered as
greatest invention
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the greatest invention
of the whole Era. Nuclear
energy
or
power
is the by-product of the greatest formula by the great scientist Sir Einstein. Nuclear
power
is considered as
non renewable
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a nonrenewable energy source
nonrenewable energy source
energy
source. Nuclear
power
is used as one of the
source
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sources
of
energy
and in the modern
world
; many countries are using the nuclear
energy
for the generation of electricity and
thus
reducing the use of other source of
energy
for the production of electricity
such
as wind, tidal, hydro and thermal. Nuclear
Power
is widely used in the several countries, it is estimated that 25 percentage of the electricity in the
world
is generated from the nuclear
power
. The main advantage of the nuclear
power
is that polluting gases is not
been
the state or fact of existing
being
produced. Nuclear
power
does not contribute to global warming and relatively the production of
energy
with nuclear
power
is very cheap. The main disadvantages are the Waste, the waste is radioactive and it is very difficult to dispose, the safe disposal is very difficult and expensive. Local thermal pollution from wastewater affects marine life and other main concern is on the production of nuclear weapons, Nowadays many countries are focused
in
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on
this
kind of activities. UNO has formed a committee and the countries have mutually agreed that they will not produce any nuclear weapon.
Anyhow some
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Anyhow, some
countries
are focused
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focus
on
this
kind of activities and threatening the whole
world
. In conclusion the nuclear
power
is a boon and a bane at the same time. So every country should use
this
energy
wisely for the better enhancement of the whole
world
.
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