Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Being a
parent
is a duty that most of people will experience during their life. There is an arguable that for being a superb
parents
Suggestion
parent
some inner behaviour should be learnt from earlier grades of
school
. I completely agree that indispensable skills for being an especial
parent
should be taught from primary
school
.
This
essay will
aiso
in addition
also
illustrate some features of an ideal
parent
. There is a belief that essential skills for being a lovely
parent
in
future
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the future
should be
practice
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practiced
practicing
from prior ages of life.I believe that key virtues should be taught through
events
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the events
of life from rudimentary grade of
school
, so that they can will be practiced day in day out and eventually they will penetrate to our mindset and behaviour.
Moreover
, the fundamental of being a proper
parent
is being a good human and have a
sens
a general conscious awareness
sense
of
symapthy
sharing the feelings of others (especially feelings of sorrow or anguish)
sympathy
for others.
there
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There
are several skills that an individual should learn include tolerance,
responsility
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
, financial savvy and awareness.
Firstly
, a
parent
should be tolerant in confronting of their
childeren's
a young person of either sex
children
mistakes and hand in several solution calmly without any
strughles
an energetic attempt to achieve something
struggles
to rectify their mistakes.
Secondly
, parents should
also
be responsible and try to do best their tasks.
Thirdly
, they need to be intelligent in financial
subjectsand
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subjects and
prepare a comfortable condition for their offsprings so that they a
care free
free of trouble and worry and care
carefree
childhood. The
last
but not least, they should recognize their
chideren's
a young person of either sex
children
situations and find out their mood previous talking to them.
there
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There
are
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is
more range of considerations
such
as to
be friend
become friends with
befriend
, have a thicker skin about their
childeren's ciritics
Accept comma addition
children, critics
children ciritics
children critics
childeren's critics
childeren's critic
or not being prejudice and so on that can not fit
to
Suggestion
into
this
essay. In conclusion, It seems to me that being a lovely
parent
needs some skills
such
as
perceptive
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perception
, well informed and more other virtues that they should be institutionalized from
first grade
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the first grade
of
school
.
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