large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money
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Dear sirs,
I am writing in relation to the possibility of
a
sponsorship.
I would argue the positive facts to spend a little amount of money on a minor's children Remove the article
apply
sport
team. Change the noun form
sports
However
there aren't many alternatives to Add a comma
,However
practice
any sports in Correct your spelling
practise
this
town. Thanks to the peak of birth in few years, there are more kids as
Change preposition
than
never
before, it is necessary to create spaces for their well-being. In particularly for children aged 4-6 I propose a project with a duration of two years, that would Correct your spelling
ever
forsee
a course for beginners and a course for amateurs. A lot of parents ask Correct your spelling
foresee
of
Change preposition
for
this
type of service and would have been ready to spend money for the health of their kids.
Morover
, I would explain some Correct your spelling
Moreover
advantage
derived from the choice of supporting our events: we plan to have two open-air Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
concert
, previously crowded. Change to a plural noun
concerts
First
in Spring, it would be the Tulipan Band whose play pop music. Their concerts are very amazing and Add a comma
,First
colorful
, people will dancing night over. Their melodies are celestial, nobody will ask us to turn off the music. It could be Change the spelling
colourful
fortold
that it will be a presence of 10000 persons, at least.
Correct your spelling
foretold
told
Then
, we are going to organize Correct your spelling
another
an other
concert in Summer, but it will be a rap music concert. It is thinkable that it will be 25000 persons. For Correct your spelling
another
this
event
it Add a comma
,event
wil
be prepared a buffet for Correct your spelling
will
prominents
. The spectators could Correct your spelling
prominent
prominence
be have
a meeting with the stars of the moment and, when they want, they could Change the verb form
have
be visit
Change the verb form
visit
the
backstage.
We have a lot of Correct article usage
apply
feedbacks
, good opinions for the organization "Patty Party" on Facebook and Instagram page, you shall read it.
The most valuable investment, in my opinion, could be the entertainment activity. Likely there are going to be a high presence of tourists one's for these two concerts. Correct your spelling
feedback
This
is an important occasion to invest smartly.
Faithfully
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.