Nowadays, entertainers get paid more than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is this a negative or positive development?

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It is undeniable that the vast majority of artists generate more

money

than officials who work in the political sectors.

This

essay will discuss why

this

happens and how will it have a positive impact on people around the globe.

To begin

with, due to the technological development recently, it is often argued that entertainers can be benefited more than those who work in politics,

such

as the government. The reason behind

this

is that they can earn more

money

depending on the number of their followers and how long are the advertisements they operate.

For instance

, during my MBA marketing course in the United States, I found that the number of followers may vary from one entertainer to another and

thus

the more followers the more

money

In other words

, a make-up artist with 40,000 followers on Instagram can make almost 10,000.00 USD weekly, which considered a significant amount when compared to people who have a role in politics.

In contrast

, if

this

politician has an Instagram account, he will certainly make more

money

than their salaries.

Furthermore

, artists often have a significant role in people’s life.

This

is because these artists are knowledgeable at some point in a certain issue. To illustrate, Noor Al Huda, is an American inspirer who is considered as a religious icon due to her plenty of knowledge in religions she has, and

thus

she inspires many people around the globe due to her millions of followers who watch her on a daily basis. For

this

reason,

such

actions will have a vital role in society and people. To conclude, it seems to be conspicuous that entertainers have a positive impact at some point on their followers without the neglecting the technological advancements.

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Nowadays, entertainers get paid more than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is this a negative or positive development?

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