Despite health warnings a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we concerned about this? What solution would you suggest?

Smoking is one of the major concerns in most of the countries.Despite knowing the consequences people are still addicted to
this
habit. Every year million of d
ollers
the basic monetary unit in many countries; equal to 100 cents
dollars
is spent on medical expenditure to cure disease occurred due to c
igratte
finely ground tobacco wrapped in paper; for smoking
cigarette
smoking.The government spends a large portion of money on the advertisements to stop people from smoking.
This
money could be better used on food and other important activities. Smoking is very bad for health. It c
an causes
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can cause
heart disease, l
ungs
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lung
cancer, reduce l
ungs
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lung
function,
c
Accept space
,
hronic bronchitis, throat and mouth cancer. Smoking not only affects the active smoker, but
also
the passive smokers. It said that passive smokers get more affected by the cigarette smoke. Every
third
p
ersons
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person
is found to be a smoker and every fifth teenager up the age of 15 to 16 get into
this
habit. Which is a serious concern in many countries. To overcome
this
issue, various measures can be taken.
Firstly
advertisements on cigarettes should be banned and more advertisements on h
armful effects
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the harmful effects
of smoking should be shown on the television.
Secondly
, a zero tolerance ban on smoking should be imposed in public places.
t
his
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This
will be g
reat relief
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a great relief
for passive smokers and special awareness classes for all the students in the school to make them aware about i
t's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
consequences.
f
inally
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Finally
a high taxes should be imposed on all tobacco products.t
he
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The
high prices of tobacco will help to some extent to reduce the consumption of it. In conclusion, a big effort should come from the government and the society to overcome
this
serious i
ssues but,
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issue, but
issue but
the main effort should come from the people who are smokers. Especially those who want to leave
this
dangerous habit.

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