The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The chart illustrates the export earnings of a nation from different
products
in comparing two years (2015 and 2016), while
the table describes the amount
percentage difference in dispatched goods in mentioned
period. (The Add an article
the mentioned
amount
is stated in American $).
Overall
, after comparing the products
income in 2 limit
of Change to a plural noun
limits
year
it indicates that the nation received the highest export Fix the agreement mistake
years
amount
from petroleum products
with the lowest export from textiles
. Agriculture products
and textiles
obtained the same money in contrast
with other products
in 2016 while
there is not any similarity between gained values from transferred commodities in 2015.
In terms of petroleum products
there is a slight difference which demonstrates that the commodity brought the highest Add a comma
,products
amount
with more than 60 billion dollars in 2016 which there is a 3 % improvement compare
to the previous year. There is a significant rise for Change the form of the verb
compared
textiles
and engineered products
which respectively reported 15, 24% and 8.15%.
Gems and jewelry
with agricultural Change the spelling
jewellery
products
in contrast
with textiles
and engineered products
are the traded merchandises
with Fix the agreement mistake
merchandise
a
slight progress which is 5.18% and 0.81%.Remove the article
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, amount, textiles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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