The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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, the world is greatly affected by 35% of over-grazing, 30% of deforestation, 28% of over-cultivation and 7% of other causes. There are three regions that are severely affected, North

America

Europe

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Oceania

. In North

America

, erosion is 0.2%, over-horticulture is 3.3%,

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is 1.5%, which is 5% total of land degraded. In

Europe

, erosion is 9.8%, over-grazing 5.5%,

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is 7.7%, which is 23% total of land degraded.

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, in

Oceania

, erosion is 1.7%, 0% of over-horticulture,

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of 11.3%, which is 13% total of land degraded. In conclusion, the highest affected deforestation is in

Europe

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is in

Oceania

and the

last

is in North

America

. The highest affected region in over-cultivation is in

Europe

again, the

second

is in North

America

while

Oceania

has none.

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, the highest affected region in over-grazing is

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Oceania

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Europe

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North

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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this?

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