The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts display the proportion of consuming
water
for industrial, agricultural, and domestic purposes in six different countries
. Overall
, it is clear from the charts that water
is mostly used for agricultural purposes in African and Asian countries
, while
North American and European countries
used more water
for their industrial needs.
To begin
with, in Africa, South America
, Central, and Southeast Asia more than 70% of water
utilizes to
the agricultural sector, Change preposition
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whereas
in North America
and Europe
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,Europe
this
sector is 39% and 32% respectively. On the contrary
, these areas used more water
for industrial purposes, 48% and 53% respectively, while
in other countries
industrial consumption of water
requires about 10% average
.
The major portion of Change preposition
on average
water
consumption for domestic needs could be observed in South America
(19%) and North America
(13%), while
European, African, Asian
regions showed the minimum proportion of using Correct word choice
and Asian
the
household Correct article usage
apply
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